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Talent belongs to me.
The picture in the brochure (C) JocelynSamara, used with permission

EDIT: NOW with new book cover and added content. :)
EDIT II: NOW with even more content
EDIT III: A bit more content and fixed up a few things
EDIT IV: Chapter 14 now started; fixed up a few parts.
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Critique by SuperGodzilla2030 Jul 7, 2015, 1:52:45 PM
It has many diverse layers and great characters and I hope there will be more like this soon. My favorite things of this powerful story is that it not only embraces romance but also lesbianism, it handled it very well and I hope for the next story will feature new situations like bisexualism and a new threat in which not only threatens Aerona but also all of the psychic nation and if there is such a story like that I will read as much as possible and I hope that the author will make more stories like this, I her good luck.
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:iconsupergodzilla2030:
SuperGodzilla2030 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
So far so good.
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Student General Artist
Any faves to the new stuff?
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:iconsupergodzilla2030:
SuperGodzilla2030 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
Well, may favorite part is the main character getting to meet the governess.
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Student General Artist
Yep. I told you I have plans for the story. :)
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:iconsupergodzilla2030:
SuperGodzilla2030 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
And I am glad. :)
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Student General Artist
I have big plans for the story. Really big plans. :)
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:iconsupergodzilla2030:
SuperGodzilla2030 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015
Cool!
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Student General Artist
Anyway, any other fave parts?
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:iconwoopseyhooves:
WoopseyHooves Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Student General Artist
Any fave parts?
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:iconwoopseyhooves:
WoopseyHooves Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
???
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Student General Artist
There is a story with that cover.
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Looks good.
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Student General Artist
Favorite parts so far?
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't know!
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Student General Artist
Okay, sorry... :(
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's okay. It's such a long fic.
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Student General Artist
The "fic" is my baby. It's my novel and all characters are my own.
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, I guess.
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Student General Artist
Anyway, I can't wait to see what you think.
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:icontraumachick777:
TraumaChick777 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's not showing for me
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Are you on mobile? Maybe pressing download can help.
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:icontraumachick777:
TraumaChick777 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'll try that
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Did it work?
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:icontraumachick777:
TraumaChick777 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Actually I'm on my laptop now and I can read it normally. It'll take me a little bit to read it all, but I'll get back to you as soon as I can
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Okay. Sorry I caused you some trouble. :(
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:icontraumachick777:
TraumaChick777 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh it's fine, don't worry about it!
Haven't gotten that far yet, but it's interesting so far! A unique concept
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Student General Artist
It is?
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CodeLyoko-Odd-Lover Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i wish i could read it, but for some reason its not showing.
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Do you think downloading could help, unless you are on mobile or something.
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:iconcodelyoko-odd-lover:
CodeLyoko-Odd-Lover Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well, i finally got it on my iPad. right now, i find your story...AMAZNG! I'm not giving my full say on it just yet, because as a writer, my comment will be kinda long.
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Student General Artist
I'll wait for it. :)
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:iconalborato4:
Alborato4 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
i think i like the part where she loves her laugh ^^
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Student General Artist
There is more! :)
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student General Artist
That's good. :)
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:iconalborato4:
Alborato4 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Yeah ^W^
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Any other good parts that caught your eye?
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:iconalborato4:
Alborato4 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
don't know, i'll have to keep reading, but keep up the good work ^^
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you. Any criticism against it so far?
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:iconalborato4:
Alborato4 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
nope :3 its good ^^
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Like anything I could work on? Errors, character interaction flaws? Anything? *just wondering*
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:iconalborato4:
Alborato4 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
Awesome :3
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Any critique?
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:iconalborato4:
Alborato4 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
i think the story is excellent :3
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:iconteen-lyoko-fan7777:
Teen-Lyoko-Fan7777 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Fave parts so far?
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